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| sexysarah | 2007.09.21 - 02:18PM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| Ohh!
Wow, *fans herself* Are you planning a sequel? I loved this fic, was very well written!
Congrats! Author's Response: Thanks! No plans for anything. It was a completely spontaneous collaboration. Lee wrote me the first chapter, and I was so inspired I had to continue. It just sort of happened. :-) ~smoke | |||
| lovelupin | 2007.08.09 - 11:55AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| that was so great! at first in the beginning i was a little confused as to remus's reasons for...all of that. haha butttt... i love how he was trying to protect bill and the people that bill loves! aw that was greatttt! Author's Response: Oh, yes, Lupin's motives were entirely selfless. :-) Thanks for commenting. ~smoke | |||
| Zephyr | 2006.09.12 - 08:30AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| I gotta say that this story was beautiful and I loved it! I loved the psychology in it, the relationship between Alpha and Beta.
You've given me some wonderful things to think about. Thank you so very much!!!!! Author's Response: You are entirely welcome! We enjoyed writing it. | |||
| menolly | 2006.06.11 - 08:38PM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| Well, this was an excellent story, well written and very dark. Love that aspect of it, the dark part, the wolf, the power. The characters were very believable - Remus was still Remus which is something I really appreciate when reading fan fic. Yes, you have brought out his dark side as the main focus really in the story, but you still show his soft demeanor, that kind, wizard that JKR wrote. And the sex scenes, whew! They were very hot and inspiring! Great job! Author's Response: Thank you so much! It started as a rather frivolous one-shot PWP, but we did try to make it a bit more than that as things went on. We're so glad you enjoyed it. :) ~Lee | |||
| Aethonan | 2006.06.05 - 08:29PM | 1: Alpha | Signed |
| Complete story review:
Daringly and skillfully written. Excellent editing. Dry humour. You even managed to make it fit in with canon, which is rarely done well. A really good all-around fic. Author's Response: Thank you so much! We're both delighted you enjoyed it. :) ~Lee | |||
| yrra | 2006.05.30 - 09:50AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| Very nice. I enjoyed it so much. Thank you for making a fantabulous story and for sharing it with us. :D Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing! -smoke | |||
| roedhunt | 2006.02.23 - 06:20AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| Okay, I’ve read and re-read the last two chapters because it was really starting to bug me about the sex with Remus and still having sex with Fleur. I think I have it right. - Remus was trying to teach Bill that every full moon he would get wild and aggressive and the only way to release it was thru violent animal sex with Remus because he would be the only one who would be able to take it. And when Bill is in his wolf time, if he has the urge to fuck, he uses Remus. And when he’s *not* in his wolf time, and he’s back to his human time, he’ll go back to his desires of wanting to fuck Fleur. – Just Fleur, right? The reason I’m asking is because I could tell that Remus and Bill now have a little shared secret of being fuck buddies and will give each other little sexual knowing winks to each other, kind of like, “oh you just wait till the full moon. I’m going to fuck you raw.”
If that’s the case, then it’s sad - Love and compassion with a female who keeps *their sanity* and lustful, wild animal sex with each other. I mean the sexual tension between the two men would disrupt their ‘normal’ life, so how can they be free to live their own life with all that UST? And unless they’re damn good liars – which rule #1 says no lying – wouldn’t Fleur and Tonks see that? Feel that?
But, I still am confused about that last line. What kind of aspects of being a werewolf isn’t so bad after all if it’s referring to be around Fleur and having his cock twitch around her? He’s in his human form so the aspects of being a werewolf wouldn’t matter. If anything, being a *human* is a good aspect because then he still has desires for a woman and not a Dom male… Right?
Sorry. I have a tendency to over-analyse things. I know it just FanFiction, but it was just bugging me. If I didn’t enjoy the fic so much I wouldn’t have said anything to begin with. I never comment if I don’t like a fic or if it disgusts me… which it doesn’t. ; D
Annie
Author's Response: LOL! You're reading and rereading? So *that's* why our page views keep going up! ;-) I'm glad the story has been so engaging for you, even if it seems confusing. It's not meant to be overly confusing, but it *is* meant to be complicated. Just like real life romance and sex, really - it's never as easy as we want it to be. They are both in a very interesting position now, aren't they? No, it's not quite fair to Tonks and Fleur to have this werewolf sex pact once a month, but, as Remus says, he's not sure what else to do about it. They are Dark Creatures; human rules can't always apply. (And canon-wise, Remus *tried* to keep Tonks away, but she begged to be part of his life - whatever sort of life that was. *shakes head sadly*) ;-) I think you've basically got it now, although they won't be sharing any knowing winks, because as Remus pointed out, Bill won't *want* to share any knowing winks during the moon's downtime. He will forget all about it, and be able to live as he wishes, as a human, with his wife. As for the last line, I'll let smoke have a go at it, since she wrote it. :) ~Lee Author's Response: *slides in* Sorry I'm late. As Lee said, the wolf sex isn't really about sex, or gender, or pleasure, but about channeling the wolf aggression in a way that will keep the "non-wolf" segment of the population safe. As Remus said, some werewolves can't use sex and end up fighting. These are the ones who most likely (I imagine) end up living in the wild all the time. While they (Remus and Bill) may enjoy the sex during the moon time, it's not something to look forward to as it is a manifestation of their condition, and an reminder of the fact that there are aspects of their lives that they can't control. Remus enjoys it because he's comfortable with who he is, but he'd give it up in a heartbeat if it meant he wasn't a werewolf anymore. It is simply what it is for him. The last line. *sigh* I wasn't all that happy with it, and now it's come home to roost. What it meant, quite simply, was that with the werewolf stamina, he could arouse again quickly, where - as a man - he'd probably have been fucked out for days. ;) -smoke | |||
| roedhunt | 2006.02.22 - 02:02PM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| I found your fic thru a friend's recommendation and I must say I did enjoy it. A little disappointed tho that Bill gave in to the fact that he was only to be a fuck toy for Remus - whether he enjoyed it sexually or not. I honestly thought it was going to end with a "I love you Fleur but I just don't have the urge to fuck you any more... But I still love you."
I do have a question tho. The last line: "Maybe there were some aspects of being a werewolf that weren't so bad after all." I know that line was referring to the fact that he felt his cock twitch around Fleur, but with his werewolf part, he only sleeps with men, right? *scratches head* I mean that's what the whole point of the story was, right? That as a werewolf, he *only* wants a dom male?
I don't mean this to sound like a flame or a criticism, just confused.
Annie Author's Response: Hmm, well, Bill is not meant to be just a fuck toy for Remus. The relationship they eventually establish is mutually beneficial - as Alpha and Beta, so to speak. We have heard from slash fans who wanted the boys to run off together, from het fans who are appalled that the boys are cheating on their women, and from those in between, who want the four of them to just get naked. ;-) It's hard to please everybody. We hoped it was clear why Bill needs both relationships - with Fleur and with Remus, but if it's not clear to you, then that's a valid critique that you as a reader can make. We did our best. "With his werewolf part, he only sleeps with men, right?" No. He only sleeps with *Remus*, his alpha. Gender is quite irrelevant. :) The whole point of the story was really just Bill, and Remus, coming to terms with what might happen outside the forest environment if two werewolves live in close proximity, and how best they can balance werewolf desires with human lives. Hope that helps a bit! We're glad this has been so thought-provoking for you! ~Lee | |||
| lemonade8 | 2006.02.21 - 01:41AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| All's well that ends smutty!!! LOL. I think Bill's going to need a wheelchair with a big cushion for the next week, though. ;D Bill did deserve that slap. Tonks is a saint.
Thanks for the story! Author's Response: You're welcome! That's all true - and next month, they get to do it again, lol! -smoke Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! ~Lee | |||
| ZahariaCelestina | 2006.02.18 - 08:32AM | 8: Omega | Signed |
| Hello again! :o) Sorry to leave a second review, but I think you misinterpreted my first one. I used the term "erotica" to label both hard and soft PWP (I was not surprised to find hard sex in your chapters, lol, I expected it!). I did not mean to say that the sex scenes were *distasteful*, for I have read much worse, frankly, and I don't think your fic falls in that category. You guys did too much characterization thinking for it to be a fic like that. What bothers me, in clearer terms, is that they could both get an erection all the way through an ejaculation three times in a row on the morning/day right after a full moon (with, even, the suggestion that Bill could still swoop down on Fleur for some make up sex at the end of the day!). No matter now the "alpha effect" could be blamed for this, I remain much unconvinced and that's why it came as a turn-off. One long sex scene would have been far enough in terms of keeping things *convincing* (given the time frame). One of your comments made me smile, though: why did you carry on with this story if you doubted it would meet anyone's tastes? Anyway, I hope this review clarifies things. Take care! Author's Response: Well, yes, it was a bit much - for men. That was part of the point, that the werewolf side has different demands and capabilities. It did take Remus a bit longer to rouse and recover, being older, but we were trying to make the point that it is different for wolves. I'm sorry is wasn't to your tastes, but appreciate your taking the time to give such a thoughtful review. -smoke Author's Response: The sex-writing in this story is of a very specific, and deliberate, kind. There are many ways to write sex (or erotica), and the way we chose to do it here is indeed very graphic, rough, and repetitive. If it turned you off, and was unconvincing to you, that is perfectly valid for you. Why did we carry on with the story if we doubted it would meet anyone's tastes? Because it met our own, and each other's! The original one-shot I wrote that is now chapter 1 of this story, was written for smoke, as a gift. I thought she would like it. She did, so we kept writing chapters for each other. Sure, we posted them publicly hoping that others would enjoy it as well, but I never expected the story to garner the response that it has. :) Thanks for your thoughts. ~Lee | |||
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