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| gothic angel | 2006.10.15 - 12:13PM | 2: Severus | Signed |
| g-o-o-d! very nice, very snape-ysh, indeed. keeo on writeing! Author's Response: Thanks! ;) -Mel | |||
| Seph7 | 2006.03.02 - 03:50PM | 2: Severus | Signed |
| Oooooooooo, this needed some heavy panting and grunting!!!!!!!!!! Oh hell!! What can I say? Gay bloke inside this girl screaming to get out!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it anyway!! Author's Response: Ah well. Maybe it'll get added. :D Thanks. -Mel | |||
| LM | 2005.07.07 - 05:29PM | 2: Severus | Anonymous |
| Now, the plotline works, the concept works, and much of the writing is very good. However, some of the writing is a little over the top. "devoured by the jaws of passion" sounds like a line out of a cheesy romance novel. And Snape shifts character a bit. That's okay, but he would NEVER cancel class. But overall, I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing it! Author's Response: Rewrite is in order then! Thanks for the criticism! Off to work on it (and digest HBP)! -Mel | |||
| cyranothe2nd | 2005.03.24 - 06:24PM | 2: Severus | Signed |
| "...devoured by the jaws of passion"? Well, that was a scary line.
Except for that though it's a pretty good peice. Author's Response: I did it because they both have a dangerous side to them. It is supposed to tell you the depth of what they are doing and how they love each other. Thank you! -Mel | |||
| Idril | 2005.03.23 - 10:50AM | 2: Severus | Signed |
| Wow! really good! Normally I don't really like Sev/Rem (im more of a Rem/Herm myself) but this one is entirely non-sleazy fic! way to go! Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see I've managed to do that! Makes me feel good. Thank you so much! -Mel | |||
| winna | 2005.03.22 - 07:40AM | 2: Severus | Signed |
| Heh. Hardly a declaration of undying love, but then again, it *is* Snape. Luckily Remus was able to decipher the snarkiness. Thanks for sharing! Author's Response: I know, right? Snape is too snarky and sarcastic to do anything romantic. Thanks! -Mel | |||
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